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Capsule Review Fritzef August 4, 2008 (Needs Work) A rare 'official' look at a region of Tekumel, but with spare descriptions and somewhat problematic maps. Fritzef has written 2 reviews, with average style of 2.50 and average substance of 3.50. The reviewer's previous review was of Empire of the Petal Throne. This review has been read 1572 times. |
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The region chosen is an attractive one for either RPG or miniatures campaigns. It includes a considerable variety of terrain, from the dense forests of the Chakas to the mountains of the Atkolel Heights and the badlands and deep sands of the Desert of Sighs, as well as some coastal areas along the northern edge of the region and rich agricultural plains to the south. It also features a number of significant cities, such as the Tsolyani centers of Khirgar and Chene Ho, and the Pijenani capital of Pijnar. The region is also one of the main theaters of the war between Tsolyanu and Yan Kor, an important part of the ‘metaplot’ for E.P.T. and S.&G. (though more recent Tekumel RPGs are set after that war’s conclusion). There are thus a fairly large number of fortifications shown on the maps. Like any part of Tekumel, this region has a very long past, and the maps are dotted with ancient ruins to explore.
The maps share many conventions with the wargame maps of the era. They have a grid of small (3/8”) hexes and features like rivers and the edges of hills follow hex-sides rather than cutting across hexes. The large-scale hexes from E.P.T. and S.&G. are also marked on the map in black lines so thick as to be rather distracting, and their identification numbers given around the edge of the each map. Each large-scale hex is 14 small ones across, which yields small hexes about 5.9 miles, or 7.1 tsan, wide. It’s not clear why this scale was chosen, rather than one which would yield a round number of miles or tsan per small hex. Though they are not particularly lovely, the cartographic symbols on the maps are for the most part straightforward and easy to interpret, especially for those with experience in wargames. The only symbols likely to be unfamiliar are the sakbe roads (elevated and fortified highways), which are shown by three closely-spaced parallel lines with guard-towers marked by rectangles every hex or so. Surprisingly, they are the only roads shown on the maps, though lesser roads and tracks certainly exist. In any case, labels like “Be-Urun Salt Flats” or “Oasis of Tiasel” help identify unusual or ambiguous symbols, and the gazetteer provides help as well. Almost all features on the map are labeled; the only nameless sites are smaller villages, shown as black dots. The lettering used is clear, though mechanical-looking; it has none of the visual appeal of the calligraphy in the original E.P.T. maps. Overall, the maps are more functional than aesthetically pleasing.
The maps do have one major flaw, apparently linked to the reproduction process. Rivers were marked in the original printing by wavy lines along hex-sides. In some places, those lines are still quite clear in the reprinted maps, but elsewhere they did not reproduce properly. For example, the river of Bazkur on map 1 essentially disappears from the reprint for hexes at a time. Using the reprinted maps will require making a best guess about the course of some waterways and drawing them in yourself.
Given its brevity, the gazetteer unsurprisingly provides relatively little information about any given feature of the map, or even any large-scale hex. Named villages usually receive only a single, rather uninformative sentence, like Ao-Nene on p. 10: “This is a typical fishing village.” The same is true, more or less, for many physical features, such as the Ku Zhem hill on p. 20: “This is a large, steep, almost mountainous hill.” Rivers normally get somewhat longer entries, which note at least whether and where they are fordable. The gazetteer provides some basic description for fortresses, including siting, layout, and materials of construction. Entries for cities are usually a bit more detailed, noting the general city plan and defenses, and sometimes recent events in the war with Yan Kor. Yet entries vary widely in length and content, and sometimes include apparently random, if quite evocative, details. For example, the description of the city of Nrichan is mainly concerned with the glazed tiles that once faced the town walls, although the walls and the tiles have both vanished long ago. The introduction to hex 4806 notes that the clans in the region are matriarchal, and the entry for the village of Ao-Sheng explains that the prefix ‘ao’ means ‘place of’ in a dead language of the area. Such tidbits occur throughout the gazetteer, though they are more common in its early pages.
Broadly speaking, however, the gazetteer tends to concentrate on two types of information beyond basic physical descriptions. A fair amount of space is devoted to sketching the military situation: where Yan Kor’s troops have advanced into Pijena and Tsolyanu, which side in the war controls a given fortress, where military action has breached the sakbe roads, and so on. Besides the tides of war, the aspects of the maps that receive the most attention are sites for adventuring, particularly ancient ruins and structures where entrances to the underworld (Tekumel’s equivalent of dungeons) might be found. Most pages of the gazetteer feature several entries of this sort. The majority of these are fairly short and report vague rumors; for example, the description of the Temple to She Who Eats Souls on p. 8 concludes with a warning that “it is rumored that there are ancient things buried there that may want you more than you want them!” Some are tantalizingly mysterious, like the Hill of Triangles, where the locals for reasons unknown even to themselves perform a ritual that involves depositing triangles made of clay. In other cases, adventure sites have very detailed descriptions. The longest single entry in the gazetteer is for such a feature, the High King’s tomb; it includes instructions for bypassing a false tomb to find the real one, information about a booby-trapped sarcophagus, and hints on using a magical transporter found in the tomb.
The widely differing levels of detail probably stem from the origins of the gazetteer. At its root, it is a guidebook for players in Barker’s own campaign. It provides details about sites which they have investigated in some depth, but leaves others undeveloped. Indeed, the descriptions of some such sites state this fairly explicitly. The entry for the High King’s tomb notes that “it has been explored to its limits by adventurers in the past” and some entries on pp. 15-16 record the underworld explorations of one Korunme hiChaisyani, presumably a player-character. But for referees in other Tekumel campaigns, the alternation between vague descriptions of adventure sites with detailed accounts of their main features is rather problematic. If the gazetteer is made available to the players, then the adventure sites that are most fully described become relatively useless. But if the booklet is for referees alone, then more answers, and less mystery, would be preferable. It would be wonderful to know the secret behind the Hill of Triangles, for instance, or who dwells in the crystal tomb atop the Peak of the Sleeper, and why.
Even within the limitations of a player’s guidebook, there are some types of information which the gazetteer unfortunately omits. There are almost no references to individuals, beyond the Korunme mentioned above and a few well-known figures from high politics, like Baron Ald or General Kettukal. It would be helpful to have the names of governors of cities, heads of monasteries, commanders of garrisons, fief-holders within the empire, and so on, even if full statistics could not be provided. Also, the entries on settlements typically say little or nothing about population. In some cases, the gazetteer provides a general range (e.g. 100-200,000) for a city, but in other cases it gives no indication. Villages scarcely ever have their population noted, and even the size of fortress garrisons often goes unremarked. Particularly within the Tsolyani empire itself, with its massive bureaucracy and effective taxation system, population figures would (one would think) be widely available.
When the map and gazetteer are combined, another problem linked to population becomes clear. Simply put, there are far too few settlements. For example, large-scale hex 4408, on map 6, is described as “very rich agricultural land” (p. 22); it is also far enough behind the lines that it should not have suffered directly in the war. Yet the map shows only nine settlements in the area: two fortifications of moderate size, three named villages, and four un-named villages. It is impossible to be sure of the populations of these settlements, but an introductory section of the gazetteer states that un-named villages vary from 20 to 800 people in size. Using maximum figures, and with the generous assumption that named villages and fortifications have populations double that of nameless settlements (some figures earlier in the gazetteer suggest less) we can estimate an overall population of 11,200 for a territory of some 8,846 square miles, or 1.26 persons per square mile, an impossibly low figure. In fact, given the pre-modern levels of technology and transportation on Tekumel, I would expect a rich agricultural region to have a village or estate center in every small hex—they are almost 6 miles across, after all. That would result in almost 200 villages in a fertile agricultural area like this large-scale hex. Of course, it is possible that many smaller villages are not shown on the map. Indeed, for certain spots the gazetteer explicitly notes that this is the case—though this rather implies that elsewhere it is not. Ultimately, though, to make the maps and gazetteer more realistic, I think we have to assume that average villages simply aren’t marked in the fertile and well-settled regions, and that the villages that do appear are exceptionally large ones, perhaps local market centers. They are just too thin on the ground for anything else.
Perhaps a more useful question is what utility the maps and gazetteer retain today. They remain essentially the only ‘official’ depiction of a region of Tekumel on this scale, which is a good one for RPG adventures—more useful in many ways than the very large-scale maps which have accompanied Tekumel RPGs from E.P.T. onward. The political/military information in the gazetteer is outdated, of course, for those who have kept up with ‘current developments’ on Tekumel, but is fine for people who are still playing—or discovering for the first time—E.P.T. itself. And though it would be lovely to have the many mysteries of the ancient ruins and other places of adventure explained, the absence of an official answer leaves great scope to the individual’s imagination. At their best, the map and the gazetteer are suggestive, opening up doors into our own versions of Tekumel.
It would be wonderful to have a real new edition of the map and gazetteer with more beautiful maps done in color and a lengthened and revised text. Plans of settlements and fortifications, and names and some details of important regional personalities could enrich it—even if no secrets of ancient ruins were revealed. It would be an invaluable aid to beginning referees and players, and help them to get a handle on this very rich and exotic setting. Unfortunately, we are unlikely ever to see it.
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