Review Editing
Review of Shades of Noir, Book Two
I will, however, question the wisdom of placing these stories in the center of the book. The conventional wisdom in editing a short story anthology is that the collection should start strong (to grab the reader's interest) and end strong (to leave a positive impression in the reader's mind). Lisa Manns chose instead to place the only two readable stories in the center of the book. If I had not been reading the book for a review, I would have stopped after reading first two stories. I also question the editor's ability *as* an editor: the book is rife with typographical errors and misspelled words, sometimes as many as three per page.
Role-playing games have a reputation for being poorly edited, and gaming fiction has an even more deserved reputation for being just plain bad. Shades of Noir, Book Two more than lives up to both reputations.
Style: 3 (Average)
Substance: 1 (I Wasted My Money)

